"Echo's Hammer" - Theater Review
Strengths:
I very much like the task of the two main characters building an invention together as a "vehicle" to move the story forward. This also served as a catalyst for dialogue discussing and reflecting on personality differences, life questions, desires, conflict, etc. There was also good use of parallel story lines between two couples - one surreal and timeless and the other trashy and current. The ambiguity of the main characters' relationship was further enhanced by the unusual language structure, costuming, and set design. Bill Celentano gave an outstanding performance (as Diddo) that was heartfelt, charming, and sensual.
Weaknesses:
The language style was too cryptic and handicapped much of the intended meaning. My friend harshly said "it felt like an insider's joke that I never got." The combination of different performance styles (circ de solel, Shakespearian, performance art, etc.) were inventive but often seemed fragmented and non cohesive. Ken Roht's performance was too self aware and suffered from the "Babs-Syndrome" (Creator/Writer/Director/Actor/Choreographer/etc). Nancy the servant's character was a bit of a missed opportunity, never having a chance to define or resolve herself.
Lessons:
The right "task/activity" (i.e. inventing/building) can provide a strong through line/catalyst.
Design the stage, props, and costumes to reveal story/intent.
Starring in your own work can be a liability.
Make every character count.
Break new ground!
Echo's Hammer is extended through June 12th, 2005.