There's been a lot of discussion lately about the IMD thesis paper. As the second years start thinking about our theses, and the third years begin actually writing said paper, we start to ask: what should the format of the paper be? what should the paper be about? do we even need to write one? It seems as though the faculty are asking themselves the same types of questions, not just about the paper, but about the thesis project as well. I've been around the thesis process a couple of times now, and I'm starting my own thesis this semester, so I thought I'd weigh in on the paper and see what people think. I'm probably not right, but I'm hoping we can at least argue about it for awhile and see what we can figure out.
For starters, I absolutely believe we should write a thesis paper. This is an MFA, but our projects often straddle the line between fine art and research science (is there even such a line? I think it might be more like a valley). As such, they are extremely subjective and usually kind of convoluted. If we don't take the time to sit down and write down the whys, whats, and hows of our projects and process, there's a good chance they won't make sense to anyone but us. There's a lot of room for misunderstanding, not only between students and faculty (and advisors), but between IMD and the rest of the world. Writing a paper is a good way to communicate just what we're up to.
Also, at this point, we are big boys and girls. We ought to be able to communicate effectively in our native tongue by now, whether in written or spoken form (if English isn't your native tongue, you can go ahead and ignore me now). So really, the argument that writing a paper to the quality standard expected is hard or impossible doesn't really hold much weight with me. I know we're all here because at some point in our lives we decided we were creative types, but come now. Writing about a subject near and dear to you in a coherent way isn't THAT hard.
On the other hand, as a lot of people point out, IMD is not exactly a bastion of traditional academia. We don't write papers, for the most part. Video games, websites, and installation art are as much a part of our "prior art" libraries as are books, and I can't even remember the last time I took a written exam. This mostly stems from the fact that the work that we do doesn't really fit the traditional academic model, and our courses reflect that.
So now we come to the crux of the issue. Documentation and justification for our work is needed, but the traditional thesis paper model doesn't seem to fit. Quite the conundrum. I have a suggestion, which I welcome any and all to critique or modify until it's something usable. Let's start writing thesis papers like science papers. If our work does what we say it will, and it's pushing the boundaries of art or knowledge or technique or what have you, well that sounds rather like an experiment, doesn't it? Now, my memories of high school chemistry are a bit fuzzy, but as I recall, the format of a paper after an experiment went something like this:
I. Statement of Intent: This is what I am hoping to accomplish with my experiment.
II. Research: I've looked into it, and here are a bunch of things that other people have tried in my subject area. I've noted what worked and what didn't.
III. Hypothesis (may be multiple): Based on what I've read/seen, here is what I think will work.
IV. Experiment: This is how I tried to prove my hypothesis/hypotheses. I built a bunch of stuff and tried a bunch of things.
V. Results: This is what I ended up with, including a description of the final product and where applicable, the results of playtesting or other user/audience interactions with the product. (okay, that part wasn't in chemistry. move along, now.)
VI. Analysis: This is what I learned/proved/accomplished with my experiment. Here's what it adds to the current body of knowledge on the subject. Here's how/why it did or did not accomplish what I wanted it to.
And that's it. Fill in with diagrams, bullet points, and source citations however you like. Bam. Thesis paper. The format may have to be flexible for certain kinds of projects, but I think it's at least a good outline for all the things a thesis paper ought to have in it, and it's a logical way of organizing those requirements.
So, that's my take on the subject. Somebody either agree or argue with me. Preferably several somebodies, as I'd really like for this question to be resolved by the time I have to write one of these things. Ready? Go!
Comments (6)
I agree with this wholeheartedly: I have NOTHING against writing a polished, well-researched paper - as you said, it could be a useful tool for the design. However I don't want to spend a huge chunk of my thesis preparation efforts trying to shoehorn a mini-dissertation in.
Your paper structure supports and clarifies the thesis project, and still retains academic merit... seems like a big improvement.
Posted by Jamie Antonisse | January 27, 2008 3:49 AM
Posted on January 27, 2008 03:49
Not to get you to panic, BUT either your batch or the batch after you will actually have to submit their thesis to the graduate college. Previous cohorts dodged this because we were new.
I had to do it, most grad schools require it and so should you. It is an academic terminal degree and since you're going to school instead of not, scholarship is expected.
Panic now, and panic often. Read requirement for submission of thesis paper here: http://www.usc.edu/schools/GraduateSchool/current_thesis_dissert.html
To quote myself, the F in the MFA stands for the fact that you "you just have to fuckin' do it". If you think life is hard now, wait till you hit the industry. And yes, many of you have and well, you're here again, right? Because it is hard and fun so do the paper, and do it well because one day you may be old and slow and wonder how you wrote such a crazy paper...(yes, referring to me here...)
Posted by Marientina Gotsis | January 28, 2008 1:59 AM
Posted on January 28, 2008 01:59
The most awesome thing about it is that as you are graduating and especially afterwards, things are just totally insane. And it's really useful when someone asks for information on your thesis, or you are invited to give a talk, that you have this great resource you made when you actually had the time, from which to copy and paste.
Posted by Kellee | January 28, 2008 11:53 AM
Posted on January 28, 2008 11:53
Thank you for the post, M., that was useful.
Diana, I'm glad you're into writing a thesis; I'm right there with ya.
But, you're a bit off on the "valley" between science and art. Professional scientists often have to draw and/or photograph what they see and envision...and their writing has to be cogent.
Arriving at ideas for experiments is not much different than coming up with a design for a game, either.
Unfortunately, undergrad science, at least in the first couple of years, is more about the memorization of concepts than creativity. But, it has to be done. :)
Here's the list of topics I had to have in my last undergrad thesis:
Abstract
Introduction
Related Work
Implementation
Evaluation
Discussion
Future Work
Conclusion
References
Posted by Jack | January 30, 2008 10:33 PM
Posted on January 30, 2008 22:33
The thing I hate about topic lists/required sections is that they often lead to lazy writing. Not that they aren't useful, but they are no substitute for being diligent/thorough.
I have read some truly dreadful papers in my time from professional conferences, and though formally they were up to par, they were not nearly as well-formed and cogent as they could have been. Not that I'm competent, but seriously, isn't this academia?
Posted by Max | January 30, 2008 11:05 PM
Posted on January 30, 2008 23:05
Max, you are right, form doesn't necessarily dictate correctness.
But, I must say that I tend to avoid crappy papers: their abstracts usually give them away. Also, when I'm in doubt of a paper, one of the great resources I use is CiteSeer.
The list I mentioned came out of The Media Lab at MIT, so it probably works for some good people. :)
I think we shouldn't blame the forms for the fools.
Posted by Jack | February 1, 2008 1:30 AM
Posted on February 1, 2008 01:30