July 14, 2004
'homecoming'
an update on my final for perry's class:
here is a third revision of the script, the one that was actually shot.
ive decided to make the center screen always run in order and non-interactive. ive also decided to not record or use the apartment voice in the script. the two other screens will remain in a shuffle until approached.
the reasons for this are several:
1. i dont know how i want to record the third voice (the sex/person/style of the reading)
2. the scipt is really preachy in those parts and dont really add anything to the entire piece.
3. by making the middle screen static, you separate the two viewers by that middle screen, reflecting the issues in the video itself.
ive found the takes i want to use and have digitized it. next up (tomorrow) is hanging sensors with perry.
