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Jack's Looking Glass

Not "Retaliating to the Anticipatory: The Looking Glass," I blogged my "Looking Glass" a while back in order to get feedback for a script I wanted to write. Then, after several hours, I remembered that JB had a current project named "The Looking Glass." To avoid some conflict-weirdness, I deleted my blog.

But, our stories were written at different times, in different genres, and in different voices...so read on:

I wrote "Looking Glass" last spring for De Meo as our first project (although I've modified the grammar a tad since then): which, for me, had to be about a god/spirit, fire, and something else (I can't remember at the mo').

I would like some commentary on it from anyone. It's the basis of my current screenplay, "Lambence."

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Comments (2)

jb [TypeKey Profile Page]:

Damn,

Technically then, your nukes flew first.

Wiggledog [TypeKey Profile Page]:

Not nukes, John, but fluffy, downy pillows :)

Nukes are so passe.

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