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January 23, 2005

Story

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o Once there was a boy named Yun, he lived among his friends the Clouds, in the sky of Dao.

o Raised thereby the Cloud elders, he learned the ways of the wind.

o One day while playing in a cumulous valley he saw a dark cloud that laid a putrid precipitation on the planet of Urr far below.

o The cloud absorbed Yun and despite his powers he could do little to fight it.

o Luckily the dark cloud spat him out, for small boys where not of his taste.

o When Yun awoke he found himself far away from his home sky of Dao.

o He followed the sun for a day but it was no use, his cloud family could not be found. Making friends with the local Clouds, he settled down for the night.

o As he slept a great wind carried him, unknowingly, to a new sky; and when he arose the next morning a great Skyity lay before him. Excited, Yun explored the ancient, seemingly abandoned, civilization and found many a curious thing.

o While wandering the cloud gardens he discovered a doorway that was just his size, he thought “ Surely this place was not made be Cloudkind.” Traveling down the corridor he found another entranceway, this one larger.

o Upon entering, a massive hall was revealed unto Yun. In the nicest way he could Yun shouted, “Hello, I’m a friend”, as not to make enemies. The echoing of the chambers shook the great hall and as it shook a great spirit awoke from a shrine centered in the room.

o The spirit surprised to see a CloudKeeper alive revealed to Yun his origins and purpose.

o For a time Yun stayed in the city and trained with the spirit, learning his peoples ancient ways of service to the sky, and the planet Urr.

o One sunset a dark cloud could be seen on the horizon, it gave Yun a fire in his heart, so he set out to save the Sky of Urr, a CloudKeeper dedicated to cleanse the darkness.

Posted by edinehart at January 23, 2005 03:48 PM

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